Review on 16th of April - Feedback:
Project: Studio Lynn, Vienna
Project: Studio Lynn, Vienna
FEEDBACK FROM THE STUDIO ASSISTANTS:
The Project lost its distinctiveness in idea and design approach.
The first idea of nested spaces teething with a supporting mass got lost.
Furthermore the shapes of the large spaces are senseless if there are several floors in them.
A person cannot enjoy the complex shape of an object if he only sees parts of it.
Why not haveing interested single-floor-volumes nesting in a field that has levels.
Reference: Steven Holl's Simmons Hall

Advice:
Go some steps backwards to your original idea and try to get the nesting and
teething back into your project.
The Project lost its distinctiveness in idea and design approach.
The first idea of nested spaces teething with a supporting mass got lost.
Furthermore the shapes of the large spaces are senseless if there are several floors in them.
A person cannot enjoy the complex shape of an object if he only sees parts of it.
Why not haveing interested single-floor-volumes nesting in a field that has levels.
Reference: Steven Holl's Simmons Hall

Advice:
Go some steps backwards to your original idea and try to get the nesting and
teething back into your project.