Tue, Mar 20, 2007
so far your project looks pretty enclosed, work on opening the voids, either in the other sectional direction or in this section.
Designwise you should try to differentiate the interior and the exterior
A hierarchy within the leafs and within the program will help you to out your design to the next step.
Your landscape layer needs an architectural context. Find References (within the canonical sections?) and find a terminology that fits your goals. Don´t talk about the process but talk about the architectural implications of the result.
Think about the skin and the overall shape!